Tutor Job in West Vancouver, British Columbia

I am another almost high school grad in need of a hand in application essays, specifically the Common Application one. I already have three essay written and edited, but I have trouble choosing between them. All I am asking is to give me an opinion on which one would be stronger for my common application essay. Once narrowed down to the golden one, I'd appreciate a quick edit, like grammar and flow and whatnot (no major changes, don't have the heart to anymore). I would prefer someone who had experience reading, writing or editing the Common Application Essay. I'm open to price haggling. Just shoot me an estimate; pretty desperate senior here. I don't need face to face time so email is just fine. Skype is also an option. Thank you, so much, in advance and I hope you all had a lovely Christmas. Best, Sharon